tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post4203759704098033321..comments2024-01-04T03:21:53.195-05:00Comments on Fear in Writing: Guess that Character BlogfestJournoMichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11170364981958685438noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-54979125437267728492010-08-20T02:50:41.379-04:002010-08-20T02:50:41.379-04:00Woo-hoo! I am follower #200!
The narrator still ...Woo-hoo! I am follower #200! <br /><br />The narrator still sounds young, around seventeen would be my guess. Cute daddy's girl with a dark side. Wavy black hair with subtle traces of reddish highlights, large almond-shaped hazel eyes, small upturned nose, soft cherry lips. Petite but with curves in the right places.J.C. Martin @ Fighter Writerhttp://jc-martin.com/fighterwriternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-33865278598748256652010-08-20T01:10:07.768-04:002010-08-20T01:10:07.768-04:00Michele, this is so darn cute. :)
I imagine her w...Michele, this is so darn cute. :)<br /><br />I imagine her with bright big blue eyes, round rosy cheeks, bouncy yellow curls. She has deep dimples and cute red lips.Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-31501919430099782182010-08-19T23:57:11.040-04:002010-08-19T23:57:11.040-04:00This was so good. I agree with Jen on the bubbly ...This was so good. I agree with Jen on the bubbly part. I'm picturing cropped blond hair and blue eyes.<br /><br />Can't wait to see your reveal!Renaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08190361875174742351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-41393593746756372012010-08-19T23:10:59.741-04:002010-08-19T23:10:59.741-04:00Well, with the phrase "But, whatever" ma...Well, with the phrase "But, whatever" made me think she's about 16, blond curly hair just past her shoulders, blue eyes, flawless skin with pink cheeks. She's very spoiled by Daddy and gets everything she wants. She's kind of heartless. Her clothes are expensive.<br /><br />I don't that's what I got. Can't wait to meet her tomorrow. :DBrenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-16758489033678140942010-08-19T22:19:46.416-04:002010-08-19T22:19:46.416-04:00I see her as an older teen, maybe nineteen or so. ...I see her as an older teen, maybe nineteen or so. She has silky blonde curls, big blue eyes, perfectly applied make up, and the latest, more fashionable and expensive clothes.<br /><br />Great snippet!Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-20290663552703668712010-08-19T21:31:40.797-04:002010-08-19T21:31:40.797-04:00Great snippet! I see a young, blonde woman, almos...Great snippet! I see a young, blonde woman, almost Paris Hilton-esque. She's willowy in an elegant way that doesn't seem right in a girl her age. Her almond eyes always gleam with an air of entitlement, but her smile is sweet as honey.<br /><br />Looking forward to tomorrow!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-70732062546400129032010-08-19T21:26:43.015-04:002010-08-19T21:26:43.015-04:00I'm thinking 11 or 12...maybe a smidgeon young...I'm thinking 11 or 12...maybe a smidgeon younger. Long blonde hair and pale blue eyes. Obviously adores her daddy....Vicki Rochohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07381089434014961076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-77978381077153008172010-08-19T20:45:46.998-04:002010-08-19T20:45:46.998-04:00I've always seen a girl like Hayden Panettiere...I've always seen a girl like Hayden Panettiere (Heroes)as the daughter to a king. Of course she wouldn't just be the sit back and look pretty type of daughter. :)DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-32947548682847670802010-08-19T19:19:18.555-04:002010-08-19T19:19:18.555-04:00Nice! I think she's a Southern Belle, dirty b...Nice! I think she's a Southern Belle, dirty blonde hair piled on top of her head. Blue eyes and dimples.Kristin Raehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14169967050454852124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-82765637354984655732010-08-19T18:05:39.610-04:002010-08-19T18:05:39.610-04:00Ooooh, dark ;)
She's young - under 10, I'...Ooooh, dark ;)<br /><br />She's young - under 10, I'd say. Big eyes, ready to tell stories. Her hair's probably in twin braids with colored ties. She's wearing a dress her daddy bought her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034419617457525778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-83669828660549653312010-08-19T16:42:51.909-04:002010-08-19T16:42:51.909-04:00Yikes! That's some scene! Love it.
I'd sa...Yikes! That's some scene! Love it.<br /><br />I'd say blonde pig-tails or pony-tail, bright blue eyes - short. :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-22675950935592329512010-08-19T14:14:11.341-04:002010-08-19T14:14:11.341-04:00This was a tough one! I'd say she's in her...This was a tough one! I'd say she's in her teens with blonde hair and big, dark eyes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-38149237692155994002010-08-19T13:00:35.673-04:002010-08-19T13:00:35.673-04:00I'd say twelve but pretty, curly light brown h...I'd say twelve but pretty, curly light brown hair and knowing blue eyes.Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-58184112002198933712010-08-19T12:31:31.586-04:002010-08-19T12:31:31.586-04:00Ooh, interesting. Like the voice. She comes across...Ooh, interesting. Like the voice. She comes across like a little girl, but I definitely think she's older. I'm going to guess naturally brunette, but possibly highlighted or dyed lighter, closer to blond. Naturally pretty, dark eyes, but made up kinda heavily. <br /><br />I like this snippet!Summer Freyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04234534550255682010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-62077229994510407072010-08-19T12:24:52.369-04:002010-08-19T12:24:52.369-04:00ok... this IS Hit Girl, right???
totally imagined ...ok... this IS Hit Girl, right???<br />totally imagined Hit Girl... Chloe Moretzvic caswell https://www.blogger.com/profile/01218698236837610704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-85287315932924285272010-08-19T12:18:11.773-04:002010-08-19T12:18:11.773-04:00A true daddy's girl:) She is the epitome of a ...A true daddy's girl:) She is the epitome of a princess, long locks of golden hair and deep set blue eyes. She possesses a dreamy glow!Tamika:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04874834971492028558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-78139315061495212932010-08-19T10:36:18.325-04:002010-08-19T10:36:18.325-04:00I really like this. It's almost screenplay-lik...I really like this. It's almost screenplay-like. I'd say she has a really high-pitched cleerleadery voice, but doesn't possess an once of a cheerleader personality. I'd say she's quite feisty and there's a lot going on in her head that she never let's out. I see Jennifer Tilly!! :o)Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-49363131134860178862010-08-19T10:24:54.864-04:002010-08-19T10:24:54.864-04:00I think she's young, mid-twenties. Clearly war...I think she's young, mid-twenties. Clearly warped by her dad. Used to getting anything she wants. Bouncy brown hair. Blue eyes. Not good at making friends.<br /><br />But no idea what book character she is.Helen Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-59110370237946564542010-08-19T10:20:17.784-04:002010-08-19T10:20:17.784-04:00I'd say early to mid teens on the short side. ...I'd say early to mid teens on the short side. Dark hair, good deal of make-up and jewelry. Designer clothes, but young and cool, not old lady designer stuff. <br /><br />I love the whole daddy thing, Can't figure if he's a warrior or a hitman. Great scene:)Says a lto with few words.Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-2019696100980202852010-08-19T09:59:39.327-04:002010-08-19T09:59:39.327-04:00Okay, I suck at this blogfest so far. So I'll ...Okay, I suck at this blogfest so far. So I'll just guess she looks like Kate Beckinsale. At some point, maybe I'll be right!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-17692196510619765002010-08-19T09:57:23.552-04:002010-08-19T09:57:23.552-04:00Michele - How intriguing! OK, here's my take. ...Michele - How intriguing! OK, here's my take. This is a mobster's daughter. That blond hair is not natural, and she's expertly made-up. Dark eyes and artificially poignant eyebrows.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-18711179119904112772010-08-19T09:45:25.794-04:002010-08-19T09:45:25.794-04:00Rayna- Well, it's not really about her, so tha...Rayna- Well, it's not really about her, so that might be the tough part. Or maybe I just failed!JournoMichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170364981958685438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-90263576177747418012010-08-19T09:40:08.504-04:002010-08-19T09:40:08.504-04:00For some strange reason, I just couldn't "...For some strange reason, I just couldn't "see" her. But the piece was really gripping.Natashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00481081735923606868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-899067747085305622010-08-19T09:07:39.780-04:002010-08-19T09:07:39.780-04:00Jen- I had made note of it last week, and just for...Jen- I had made note of it last week, and just forgot. But the end result is the same: I made it!<br /><br />And what's funny, I hand't thought to picture her until this contest. This is a piece from my experimental WIP, with alternating narrators. Now I know what she looks like...but I won't tell till tomorrow!<br /><br />My favorite thing about this piece (if I do say so myself) is the juxtoposition of the bubbly character with her subject of a killer father.<br /><br />I actually won't be revealing until Saturday b/c I have a guest blogger Friday. Margot Kinberg will be here!<br /><br />MicheleJournoMichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170364981958685438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7193005159654060545.post-12587750886106756182010-08-19T08:57:28.229-04:002010-08-19T08:57:28.229-04:00I'm happy to see that you were still able to j...I'm happy to see that you were still able to join in on the fun and that DL's post made you remember!!!<br /><br />Great piece, this character is super fun, I love the narrative skills, most impressive.<br /><br />My Guess: Well she's very bubbly so I'm going to go with what the perfect bubbly girl looks like, pink cheeks, curly shoulder length blonde hair. Blue eyes with the perfect oval shaped face, and very light skin. <br /><br />How close was I???Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.com